語法糾錯There are many teenage champions such as Gu Ailing, Su Yiming and so on who have encouraged us a lot. Obviously, they have something in commen. They are trying to challege themselves and never fear failing. Besides, they all have strong ambitions to do their best to reach the top level that they dreamed of. There is no denying that we should learn from them and treat them as models in our lives. Furthermore, it would be more beneficial if we could challenge ourselves all the time. With persistence and determination, we will succeed. There are many teenage champions such as Gu Ailing, Su Yiming, and so on who have encouraged us a lot. Obviously, they have something in common. They are trying to challenge themselves and never fear failing. Besides, they all have strong ambitions to do their best to reach the top level that they dream of. There is no denying that we should learn from them and treat them as models in our lives. Furthermore, it would be more beneficial if we could challenge ourselves all the time. With persistence and determination, we will succeed.改進點:1. "commen" 應(yīng)為 "common",拼寫錯誤。 "challege" 應(yīng)為 "challenge",拼寫錯誤。3. "dreamed of" 更合適的表達是 "dream of",因為這里指的是他們現(xiàn)在的理想,而不是過去的夢想。
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